Amanita (amanita_d) wrote in blue_sun_story,
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The Distance Between Us

Can't remember if I've posted here before, I know it's been quiet lately tho. Anyway, I wrote this on the train yesterday; it's a bit pretentious, but I like it :)
(obviousness alert: it's about separation, and also the rhythm of the words)

The Distance Between Us

Then I looked left
And then I looked right
And then I laughed
And then I cried
For one side was wet
And one side was dry
With me at eye level
And you way up high

In the rain.

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